Reviews for love, why don't you run?
Fyxthamnzwik chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
sounds to me like she needs to walk first. "running" is not always as easy for one person as it was for the other. so many things to consider, like confusion, ostracism, and the fear of adopting a new identity.

walk with her first, and let her see that there is someone there with her. if she walks with you, at least you're not alone. Though you may want to run, if she's never comfortable with it, you should take comfort in knowing that even if you don't have her, she has you. being in love is knowing that the other person has you entirely, and that nothing can ever change that, while expecting nothing in return.
Alphabetical Dreams chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
that's a beautifully articulated poem! it has so much energy and power in it. i love the lines "we should run away from all this/from the big and lights,/and big egos." it's beautiful. i love the feelings in this poem. they are so wonfderfully imagined. it's lovely.

live, laugh, love.

C. a D.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
It painted a picture. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
and again, your amazing. You have the most amazing way with words, k.