HM... EITHER THIS GIRL IS A REAL DITZ OR ACTUAL CRAZILY NBORMAL.. MY QUESS IS CRAZILY NORMAL BECAUSE IN MY OPION (WHICH DOESN'T COUNT FOR MUCH LOL) MOST GIRLS (NO OFFENSE TO YOU) ARE SOMEWHAT THAT WAY . BUT THEN AGAIN WE GUYS WOULDN'T KNOW WHATS HAPPENING AND WHO SAYS WE DO ANYWAYS LOL.

DID ANY OF THAT MAKE ANY SENSE AT ALL GET BACK TO ME IN A 10 YEARS AND MEN WILL STILL SAY THEY DON'T UNDERSTAND GIRLS LOL

i like this s tory. its funny

Another adorable piece. :)

Or maybe this was the one I read first.

Either way, I love it.

lovelovelovelove!

lol

that was funny

i must say, this is a very good story. i enjoy reading it and the character, Rachel, is awesome. Haha

awesome writing as usual Guppie

Haelo ;p

aw! so adorable! :]

Cute! I agree with NoieD, though. It's a cute one-shot, but you should at a teeny tiny bit more! The entire story was so so cute! I loved it! Awesome one-shot!

Well done. It's needs a little editing, but I totally enjoyed these characters and their interactions. Why don't you polish it up a bit and add some more? PLEASE! :)