Reviews for A little bit of you
oxytocin chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
This is a nice subject, but a little over-done. You didn't bring any originality to the topic, either. There is a grammar mistake in the 3rd line - 'your' should be 'you're' because it is 'what YOU ARE doing now'. I like a lot of your other stuff, so I won't hide the fact that I was disappointed in this.
FeralShadowwolf chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
that was quite a sweet one. the rhyming scheme was good, and its obvious there's real emotion behind it. the rhyming felt a little strained at times, but overall, i liked it.
123456DoesNotExist chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
Aw! It's so cute!

I really liked your rhythm, it flows really well. Your last stanza is particularly good, it's really nice. You're poem is so cute, it's really sweet, but sad...