|Reviews for Old Souled Demetri|
| The Wandering Musician chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
I don't think I fully understood what was going on here, but I liked it. I felt like it was meant to be sung, especially the stanza "Oh oh, old-souled Demitri". The repetition was wonderful, as was the assonance and alliteration. Wonderful job!
Daughter of the Faeries
| Pretoria chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
beautiful repetition :]