Reviews for name on the wall
End-of-forever chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
i like the idea of carving your name into an imaginary wall. nice image. nice poem.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I love the idea of a hangover from smartness... that's a really great idea

I love the second stanza... its a great way to describe something as simple as looking out the window

the last stanza is very sweet... wanting to leave your mark to a kindred soul... nicely done

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half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
konban wa

*dreamy sigh* Brings me back to all the times my mind has floated out of the classroom - and all the times I'm sure it'll happen in the future.

I especially liked the fact that it was carved into an *imaginary* wall and not a real one. It made the poem all the more magical. Kudos.

Ha det

lost for words chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
This reminds me of exactly how I felt when I was in school, except that I never expressed it quite like this.