Reviews for limits
lost for words chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
I think we'd all like to step back and make our own rules.

The ground *is* the boundary, and we can't get past it, because there's always gravity.

Anyway. I don't like it as much as some others, but still good work.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
This is like a half-hearted self awakening. I don't know, I like it, but at the same time there is something saying there needs to be more. Maybe I'm just disatisfied with poetry in general today. Well, good job.