Reviews for No revolution
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
since I'm not who to decide if there's.. who to seems odd.. who decides might sound better

I wish you to come with me 'cause... I wish you would come or just I wish you come... the to doesnt sound right

it can't be such thing... a thing

I like the repetition and the capitalization... those were really nice and the whole idea of the piece is great as well