|Reviews for The New Year|
| gulistala chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
I love how this comes across as simple writing yet when you stop to think about it, it's much more significant than that. Such a 'simple' fic yet it conveys much more info, messages etc.
I like how you repeated at the end the fact that it's New Year's Day, it really does emphasise the idea of the strong friendship, it also lets off many interpretations (after all, people can interpret one thing in more than one way...)
As for constructive criticism, to be honest, I can't find anything! D
Keep up the good work!
| 012323232 chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
is this based on something true?
i like the quietness.
| tonight we storm chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
loved that. really simple, created a really nice picture in my head. i loved the nods, the card playing, even azoth on some rpg made it that much better. the last lines tied it up perfectly, well done. if you dont mind reviewing some things of mine it'd be much obliged, nice work again :)