Nice start.

aw

your style is great!

please dont ever change it. haha!

i intend to review on every chapter u got in this story.

n if i dont,,well,,just noe that it means i was too engrossed. haha!

those two are too funny! I like this new part of the story already! Its more funny and lighthearted than the original story who was more serious but good nonetheless. This story is a good contrast to it.

those two are funny two read. As i said nicks a goner! Hmm she is dressed and has met her mr.-mindshattering already she just dont know yet great read.

those two are insanely funny...aha i think nick is a goner.

those two should get together mister mischief and miss chaos this story is boudn to get interesting. God those two are funny...i hope youll have more scenes like that up your sleeve. oh oh naughty naughty Sal playing with nicks hopes like this. Hm i might like Sal and nick even more then Fay and adam, simply because they are soo funny.

The Sal-nick scene was funny to read. I dont think Jen and nick will last long. Hes to interested in Sal. good story you got me hooked again. And hes right freckles are cute!

a good and funny story! i like the chemistry between fay and adam very much. Sal is a funny character i like her whenever she is around its funny to read.

This was the first of your stories i read, i just stopped reading it for some time. now i just had to refresh my knowledge a great story.

Im off to read on!*grins*

Aw! That made me feel all teary! God, you write so well Bev! I am dead jealous. I am hopefully uploading first chapter of new, abslutly amazing story. Please read it?

~Lillie

PS Sorry that took so long to review - I was in Switzerland , touching base with an old friend.

I absolutely loved it! Totally amazing! The ending was fitting and no part of the story seemed rushed and I loved every minute of it. I love the dynamic between Nick and Sally and I think that the relationship between Adam and Fay was incredible! Really really really awesome awesome job!

FINALLY! That was good, i enjoyed it. Sorry I'm a little delayed in my reading

Okay, I can't take it anymore! I have to review right here before I read anymore. Your story is so awesome! I hope you know howtruly awesome it is, but if you don't, it's so f-ing awesome! I love it soo much. The chemistry is amazing. The characters are all believable and I absolutely love it! I'm going to keep reading, but I just had to say that!

Ouch. Poor Nick. Poor Sal! Its looking amazing though, though I doubt it will get as long as Welcome To Crete. Teehee.

~Lillie

Wow, really well written there, especially by bringing Nick's feelings in. I feel for him so badly!

Anyway, what Nickelback song was Sal singing? I have four of his albums and I don't recognise it... (I thought I was a true fan, but I obviously ain't, which sucks). I am also really sorry I didn't reply, I was in St. Petersburg, which has no internet cafés where you don't have to drink coffee with vodka. So I was internect less. But except for the lack of internet conectinon, Russia was amazing. It's number two now on p-lace I would like to live, it's so beautful. I am truly smitten *sigh*.