Reviews for Betrayed
Stormfeather chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
This holds power in its words and I feel it's better that it doesn't rhyme.
jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
you. made. me. think. of. bad. stuff...how. dare. you. thats EXACTLY the shit i juss wen through with a friend. -sobs-
Isca chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
"What should I do now that I have no one?" The confusion, frustration, and pain in this line is ver powerful. You described loneliness and hopelessness well here. :)