Reviews for Secret Affair
Guest chapter 8 . 1/25/2014
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Reader chapter 19 . 12/29/2011
from chapter 1 to 19...it feels like this story was written out to satisfy your urge to write...poor constructed plot and lots of wrong grammar...

But still, I will continue to read for proper comment once finished reading it.
love the story chapter 7 . 12/11/2011
So sweet when he called her his butterfly- never heard of that term of endearment and absolutely loved it!
love the story chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
That was a original and unique idea about the shooting range...loved it! Good way to get out your frustrations out too :)
love the story chapter 47 . 12/11/2011
I absolutely love the story, but next time might want to add more about how they love each other other than sex. In the story, it seemed like he just liked her for sex, but then you saw at the end of the story where he married her so then the readers read that is was more than sex. Fantastic story and very original!
Elyssa Morales chapter 47 . 11/17/2010
OKAY. THIS IS A SHIT STORY. I MEAN WHAT KIND OF LESSON ARE YOU TRYING TO TEACH PEOPLE? REPORTING THIS.
Elyssa Morales chapter 25 . 11/17/2010
She's a shit daughter.
ZackRyderlover222 chapter 3 . 10/10/2010
Love it~! Please udate it!
emotionsareoverrated chapter 47 . 5/24/2010
this is by far one of the best stories i have ever read!
sdwinfreak chapter 41 . 5/10/2010
Great story... please update! Thanks. )
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooope chapter 47 . 3/24/2010
aw! so amazingly sweet! amazing story!
Winona chapter 47 . 12/24/2009
I LOVED IT! But was kind of awkward to read snce my dads name is Mark
Writing Reality chapter 47 . 12/22/2009
WHOA!

FREAKING LOVE IT!

SEQUAL! PLEASE! :D

-x-

Padmai -Hidden Assassin-
Dragonwryn chapter 47 . 12/20/2009
Whew...Wow I love this story it is fantabulastic! Definitly will read it over and over again XD Love your work
3DarkGoddess3 chapter 47 . 12/14/2009
Even though it was wrong what she did you couldn't help really liking her. That had to be really hard to do as a writer because I believe it was very wrong but I still liked them and the story a lot. I still really like Josh too he was never really the bad guy cuz he was just to sweet to be.
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