Reviews for unfiltered and eternal
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
I love this ]
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
I love the last three lines; there's something magical about them. Totally unbelievable. Fantastical and beautiful. Keep writing! :)
simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 5/24/2008
I like this because it flows very well and makes perfect sense, which sometimes does not happen in stream of consciousness. I also liked the parenthesis and where you split up the lines, it fit perfectly with the flow. Great job.

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Aquafied chapter 3 . 5/22/2008
i think it doesnt seem like ecstasy to me

but perhaps it differs from person to person
lackluster chapter 2 . 3/13/2008
i'm reviewing chapter two simply because its my favorite of the two you've posted. they're both simple and astounding in their own way though. i like the style.

chapter two, something about it is vintage. yearning for a typewriter. sweet.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
I like this.. the word choice is really powerful
simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 3/7/2008
interesting last line... nicely done
daretobe-dIfFeRnT chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
nice! i like how you chose to scatter the words a bit. to me, it gave them more meaning:)