Reviews for descent
bahaghari chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Beautiful.
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Beautiful with a slight tinge of melancholy.
aya's notebook chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
i'm impressed ;) **off to read more
miscellanea chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
This was really beatiful. The one image that really caught my eye was in the first stanza when you talk about clouds tumbling out of the sky. How strange to envision! Keep Writing writing writing...

xx Miscellanea
white tigeris chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
amazing & beautiful. O_O
The Postscript chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Mmhm .. really beautiful imagery. I think, as a reader, there's lots of directions that you can take this. It's very interesting how you direct the poem with very particular phrases and images, and yet there's so much room left for imagination. It's really a delicate, beautiful combination. Keep writing, k.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Absolutely amazing poem. So much growth in your poetry. Excellent job. Write on!

Anna _
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
we are all angels

at one point.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
i like the abstractions and imagery. great piece.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
really beautiful descriptions... and the whole sky angel thing was really amazing... i liked the format too... II kinda wished their was a question mark though in that one line.. anyhow awesome piece
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
this reminds me of ee cummings. you have very descriptive poetry. "fated upon sun kissed cheeks" lovely.