|Reviews for Heaven and Hell|
| You Know Who chapter 13 . 1/14/2010
Just wow, amazing work
| lux perpetua chapter 5 . 3/10/2008
interesting! is this partly inspired by the show heroes? just curious.
looking forward to reading more...
ps. if you are thinking of editing or rewriting this story, it might be interesting to do Cole and Nathaniel's rebirth as a prologue. Suck your readers in with the action!
| lux perpetua chapter 4 . 3/9/2008
great closing line! please update.
| lux perpetua chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
interesting story so far... you have a smooth style and your dialogue is very believable.
one thing - you refer to your main character as "Kira" in this chapter, then go back to Candice. Is this a typo?
Looking forward to reading more.