|Reviews for The Last Wish of Calypso|
| Harmonic Discord chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
I absolutely love the imagery of this piece: beautiful. Your writing seems to grab the reader and drag him/her in. Especially liked your comparison of the dress to a "flag of surrender".
There were a few places where your breaks didn't quite make sense to me; for instance:
“You were lovely here,” She speaks, - I think it should be "she"
“Your frailty summoned by compassion… Your touch, of homesickness wrought, felt softer than any summons of strength,” the rocks - I think this should be two separate sentences.
Overall, however, wonderfully done. :)
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| sckry chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Beautifully written, there is a definant wistful, tragic feel to your writing.
| Circus chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Yours are the only stories that I come away from wishing that I had something worth writing about.