Reviews for fast
viennacantabile chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
the best part about this is that i couldn't even tell it was a haiku until i read the reviews. i hate haikus that are so obviously meant to read like them. if that makes sense. but this just flowed so brilliantly that it did justice to what haikus and poetry are really supposed to be. also, i love the insertion of 'this' into parentheses. nice touch.
XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Hmm...i dont really like haiku's because they're so short and everything but this was good. I liked it.

silent
killer syntax chapter 1 . 3/18/2008
haha, this is a spectacular piece. it's short, yet it's very powerful in the sense that it expresses so much. great job!
Mitsunaga chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Sexy, not bad.
moon-behind-dark-clouds chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
I like it! Don't know exactly why, but I really like it )