|Reviews for Buttoned Down|
| completeandtotalrandomness chapter 10 . 12/27/2010
I'm really liking this, are you going to continue it?
| Laureina chapter 10 . 3/19/2009
This story is very nice. I love it a lot!
I can't wait till your next installment!
| teethandlungs chapter 6 . 8/2/2008
Okay I have a feeling I've read this before. And it's possible I have. It's also four in the morning. So it's possible that I've read this before at some other obscure hour of the day awhile back and didn't remember. I had this feeling at the back of my head like this story was familiar and then I got to chapter six and...now I'm...so bloody tired and I have...three hours to sleep and...gah. I want to keep reading but I can't. I read the first six chapters like VROOM. So I just thought I'd tell you it's lovely so far, despite that I possibly already read it once...or twice...WHATEVER I'm reviewing now and that's what matters, right? ;-; Anyway, I'll review again when I get to the end. Which will be after I go to sleep and wake up.
God I need to stfu.
| TheArtOfBeingMe chapter 10 . 7/29/2008
Oh my, things start to get very intersting in this chapter! Me likey ;)
Good chapter, as always!
| xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx chapter 10 . 7/28/2008
and rather hilarious in places as well :)
please update soon!
| Kneecap chapter 10 . 7/26/2008
Well that was...explicit O_O.
xD. I can't remember if I asked for it or not :D. I like how Amelie has more than one side to her, and I wanna know more about her :D.
I get the distinct feeling you like writing about sex *narrows eyes*.
Nothing major to criticise, just a couple of tense mishaps.
But...it felt JUST A LITTLE BIT (don't kill me) like you spent too much time on the less important aspects of the chapter (blowjob) than on the more interesting parts of your plot 9like the showers and Amelie).
Still loved it though :D.
| zomgnessa chapter 10 . 7/24/2008
aww i like this chapter ]
| treewalker chapter 10 . 7/23/2008
yayy! omg avery's right. edmund is perfect!
great chaptter! cant wait for more!
| Cattails chapter 10 . 7/23/2008
Hm...I'm still suspicious of Edmund...maybe because he seems like too good a guy? I don't know...I still think he's up to something! Especially with Gabe acting weird... Who knows? XD I guess I'll find out eventually... Looking forward to the next chapter!
| Nicholas Scott chapter 10 . 7/23/2008
oh how I'm so completely enamoured with Edmund and Avery. I just love them. Avery's tentativeness is so endearing. Edmund's want to pleasure. They're so beautiful together. The innocence of it just makes me smile. They're just lovely together.
What's this "good chpater" will suffice crap. If I see good chapter in one review, I'll have to send heat sinking missiles in their direction. :)
| zomgnessa chapter 9 . 7/18/2008
this is, if possible, almost as good as your other story D
update update update P
| Cattails chapter 9 . 7/16/2008
I am greatly entertained by this story I think it gets better as it goes on :P But I keep thinking Edmund is up to something...eh, maybe I'm just paranoid. Avery's adorable, though :P It's a very cute story
| Pretty Rad chapter 9 . 7/14/2008
GAH! I LOVE IT!
Pretty Pretty Pretty Please?
| CharismaticOutCry chapter 9 . 7/12/2008
I'm so glad you decided to continue this story, it makes me incredibly happy. I absolutely just adored this chapter! It was long by your standards and just a delight! Update soon!
-I'm so creative, yeah?
| Kneecap chapter 9 . 7/12/2008
Tired. Dead. Dying. Sucky review.
It was hot in the showers, and I loved the drama with Gabe at the end. Meh. Chemistry teachers and gym coaches should never get that close to each other; ew.
I sleep now.