|Reviews for Love or Pride reformat|
| Sketcymon chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Reformating it was definitely a good idea! Took a glance at the original and then this one, and I have to say that this will get you a lot more readers. :)
The concept and story is nice from what I scanned through in the previous version so I hope you will reformat the whole thing so the whole read will be more interesting. Looking forward to it!
| Esquirella chapter 2 . 3/12/2008
Interesting story concept.