Reviews for In So Deep
Which Mistake am I chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
This is really good too! :)
misery sister chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Holy bejebus, this was a really, really good poem. I mean, at first I didn't expect much since the summary wasn't that great -but wow, it was really, really good.
Eclipsia Soulbird chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
You have a talent for poetry I could never mimic. This is fantastic- the opening two lines were especially powerful. Great work!
ten pts above average chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
the rhyming was started off ok than just got shakey...make sure you stay consistent...it really makes it hard to read...
FellowMan chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
this is good, I liked its flow and strum-like lilts :D