Reviews for Alternation
Sword And Sorcery chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
I didn't quite understand this poem, but I liked it nonetheless! :-)
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
i liked the style
SheridanSpence chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
Wow...very nice freeverse. You have a unique style. :)
Nemonus chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
I can't say that I'm personally a fan of the e.e. cummings-ness of this poem, but that's a stylistic choice. You certainly evoke a scene and, if not emotions, traits, in this poem. The last two lines did not quite connect, but I liked them more than the others because they were astronomical instead of physical. This review is based a lot on personal instead of writerly opinion, so don't mind that my feelings for this piece are lukewarm-I can find no problems with the rhythm.
artificial destiny chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
i like it, it makes me think.

but im curious to know your interpretation of it.

-artificial destiny