Reviews for The Butterfly
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
This is so sad. Great job expressing the butterfly's feelings. Nice work.

Twilight Starr
Getuie chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Wow. So many layers to this piece. Quite insightful.
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
This reminds me of a recent visit to an airport-store where they were selling those butterflies preserved in glass. I think that's a good thing, though. P I like when writing makes me think/recall things and events.

I really like the line 'It’s perfect, both in English and Latin'. And is the first line supposed to be sarcastic, I wonder? That the butterfly is bitter at being caught and labeled so?

The lines 'you’ll have forgotten about me by tomorrow' and 'I know that you can’t hear me' are touching ones. Poor butterfly. (

I like how you personified and gave it a voice, though. )
S. M. Saves chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
I don't understand the use for the hypens at the beginning of some of the lines but the poem's content was excellent and kind of creepy, especially at the end "I know that you can't hear me".