|Reviews for To Be Understood is Good|
| Kefrith chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
This is fantastic! Fyi, I noticed one grammatical error which I don't think was intentional: On the 11th line from the end, the first "to" ought to be "too". Great work, though!
| socks-lost chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
I think the title went well with the story. I liked it a lot. lke people talking to another thing i was chill. made me smile. thanks for the review. ]
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Interesting. I liked the conversational bit about it. Nice work.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
I like the phrase about the snail.. it's interesting an great alliteration... the part about you being a puddle is also really awesome.. and the play on the word but was funny too
I'm not sure if the piece was supposed to be confusing because of the theme or not.. but it was a bit confusing about what was talking and what wasnt and who was saying what, but other than that nice job
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| Getuie chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
The title of this piece drew me to read it. Admittedly, I didn't grasp everything (or perhaps most) of it. With that said, it did kind of remind me of my own nondescriptness. The fear of revealing more yet the longing to reveal. The lines 'Yes, like a glass of water being spilled: / I gush out to fast to be saved (let alone noticed)' struck me as most revealing of the speaker... and something I think is the outcry of many.