Reviews for The Grown Up
Kefrith chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
This is great! I love all the imagery you use!
account-no-longer-active chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
I like just about everything about this poem, the structure, the message, and the imagery. One thing though, the below lines are a bit awkward.

"Hiding there inside that grown-up standing inside

With their scalding, delicious coffee—"
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I wouldn't want to clear the driveway either. It's sad when you grow up. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Getuie chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Oh, I loved this. I only recently experienced snow for the very first time in 23 years. It was SUCH a pleasure. Unfortunately the country I experienced it in doesn't bother scraping snow off of sidewalks so everything was pretty slippery... but still amazing. The personification of the snow... it's words to the speaker was so amusing and heart warming. Some fantastic lines in there. Definitely a favourite.