Reviews for Lunch Group
Seigetsu Ren chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
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I liked your poem. It was very vague, but I relate it to my own group of friends. I also liked how you managed to get it rhyme without making it sound very forced.

The only thing I didn't quite like was the last line. If they were only friends for a week, it isn't a very strong friendship, is it?

That's all. Hope you'd continue writing!
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
This is cute - I like the simple description of friends having a good time, but you also ended it with a line that was a bit more thoughtful - 'A month, a year, or just one week'. Your image of 'smiling eyes' was my favourite.

Just wondering, why is the title ('Friends') inside the piece different than the other title ('Lunch Group')?
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
This is nice.. it is really the perfect description of a lunch group.. although I was a bit confused because it's title lunced group but in the piece you have friends by you... but other than that.. I liked it a lot

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