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I liked your poem. It was very vague, but I relate it to my own group of friends. I also liked how you managed to get it rhyme without making it sound very forced.

The only thing I didn't quite like was the last line. If they were only friends for a week, it isn't a very strong friendship, is it?

That's all. Hope you'd continue writing!

This is cute - I like the simple description of friends having a good time, but you also ended it with a line that was a bit more thoughtful - 'A month, a year, or just one week'. Your image of 'smiling eyes' was my favourite.

Just wondering, why is the title ('Friends') inside the piece different than the other title ('Lunch Group')?

This is nice.. it is really the perfect description of a lunch group.. although I was a bit confused because it's title lunced group but in the piece you have friends by you... but other than that.. I liked it a lot

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