This is an interesting one. I like the way that you wrote this.

keep it up.

Short, simple, sweet. I like the last line, it is so true.

keep it up.

I like this... the last line is really sad and it's something I can really relate too... the only thing is italicizing and putting quotes around the quote seemed a bit excessive... anyhow nice job

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