|Reviews for A Man's Best Friend|
| Basara chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
an alternative is using a good branded glue to fix it up... lol... close relationship with a person is the fixer of most problems...
| Written chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
your summary made me laugh, so I just had to read the poem :)
'torn paper heart'- beautiful line!
I really liked this haiku :) it seems so simple... but true.
| Thenardier chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
Imagery used here is splendid. The ambiguity present helps make this a more delightful haiku, even though the title aims to reveal more.
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I like the image that is portrayed in the line, "this torn paper heart..." It seems so fragile and distant. For a first haiku, this is very beautiful. Great job.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
I love the image of the paper heart, but it seemed like some words like "no, nothing" and the a in the last line were just there to make the right syllables... but it's still really awesome for your first haiku
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| Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Very pretty! D
It's simple, efficient, and meaningful. I have really nothing to critique - I just wanted to say I like this a lot.
And is this a dog we're talking about? P