|Reviews for Kiss of Twilight: In the Absence of Light|
| MileyRowling chapter 33 . 10/21/2014
Great work! I really enjoyed it!
| 8ite Chomp Glomp chapter 28 . 8/11/2014
Have I told you that I love your rambles? No? Okay then. I'll tell you now. I love your rambles. They give me a peek inside your brain world where Vinny, Helena, Dru, Cindy, Lycan, Melina, Caspian, and so much more dwell. It gives me more glimpses of the people in your head. This got me thinking. We all have our own world in our head (maybe more than 1), and within those worlds are people. Authors write about their world which is why when they describe how they write, they often describe it as if they were retelling a story and putting it down on paper instead of creating it and molding the fabric of their own universe. They say that the story was always there, but they are simply its messengers. This is starting to turn very philosophical. I did not intend this to turn that way... Meh. It reminds me of religion. Prophets and such. Ah well, I wanted this review to be short and sweet, but I guess it's not.
| 8ite Chomp Glomp chapter 18 . 8/11/2014
In the Q&A (I haven't given up on reading it yet!), you said that this chapter was hard to write or something along those lines, but this chapter made me aware of my beating heart (I don't understand a racing heart... unless exercise) which most stories don't do. I must reassure you again that you have plenty chemistry between those two. And tell your beta that I love her because we think alike. :3
| 8ite Chomp Glomp chapter 7 . 8/11/2014
Alas, I fear that if I read your Q&A I will be distressed at what's going to happen net, but if I don't read your Q&A I will be curious beyond belief...
| Lily chapter 6 . 2/1/2014
3. Lily (SAME NAME)
| Guest chapter 26 . 8/3/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
| Dotpoint chapter 9 . 11/11/2012
Aww! So cute! I love your stories! Also last sentence - lol. :3
| Seranade chapter 5 . 7/31/2012
I only recently discovered this story. But I've read the first book and am now currently on the second (obviously). This is great! I love it! But is Helena ever going to call Vinny by his real name?
| Rosedreamer101 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
LOL. okay...so i skipped to the end to make sure it ha a happy ending- it didn't. so...i'll wait till you finish book 3 LOL then i'll read the whole thing. for now. i guess i'll just put book 3 on alert and read it when you're done. when i realise it's done O.o wait...noo...if i put it on alert. i might accidentally read it. have no idea whats going on...then give up -.- this sucks...i'll think of something.
| joursnuageux chapter 33 . 8/27/2011
i am in love with Once Upon a Dream! francis tormenting robert with ways of destroying swords has to be one of my favourite parts! i am pretty confused by the q&a section at the end though, obviously i missed reading the original ending, hopefully its similar in book III then i can come back and read the answers P
I was really eager to read about eve's love story before i get to her death, but it was no where on your other website, can you tell me where i can find it?
if you need some one to reread or edit when your beta doesnt have time, im happy to lend a hand. but i hope ill be up to date by then!
sorry i havent reviewed every chapter, but i usually only do it on incomplete stories, when the next chapter is there i just have to read it! i hope to read many more of your stories!
| PrincessCalissa chapter 11 . 6/14/2011
Holy cow that had a chicken! 0.0
| MrsHellman chapter 33 . 4/27/2011
So, second part of the series? This is interesting, very interesting indeed. *tries to act all Sherlock Holmes* Did you know, I have a shirt with the text ‘No Shit Sherlock’ as well as the silhouette of Mr Holmes himself. Oh man, one of my favourite shirts . . . anyhow, back on track. Just like before I’ll tell you what I liked and didn’t like as much, I can assure you though: you’ve become slightly better with writing since the first book, even though it’s a miniminiminimininmum gap between the books finishing and publishing dates. Like… a couple of minutes? It’s just that the entire story itself flows better in the second book. Now:
I Adore Chocolate:
-Oh man, you know what I’m going to write, dontcha? Helena and Vinny sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G. They’re so adorable in this book; it makes me want to puke butterflies, unicorns and rainbows. I really like this coupling and I hope that Vinny is going to be the one to wake Helena up. (Wouldn’t surprise me if you didn’t make that happen though. I just wonder how you’d be able to pull it off when they’re both obviously in love with one another.) The scenes where Helene slept on his torso and when they talked in her room at night were more adorable than adorable.
-The story is moving forwards at a different pace and I like it that way, not as many time skips; they could be confusing you know. We don’t have too mant different characters involved as well (except Bliss and Lycan, but we’ve heard about him before so it’s not really a ‘new character’ per say.)
Not That Fond of Coffee Though:
-T.Y.P.O.S. Yeah, but they’re always going to be there, as I said before, so really what can you expect?
-Aurora’s behavior was a bit of a surprise towards the end. It didn’t truly fit in. She changed her opinions that fast, and only over a year? She’s been raised to be believe in something, so it was a bit unrealistic for her to act the way she did.
So, I didn’t have as much to say for this book, I was I such a hurry to go read the other story that I didn’t really have the time to think this through thoroughly. Hehe . . I wand some Vin/Hel moments to occur. They’re do adorable for me to stay true to Action stories and not feel so girlt over Romance stories. *sigh*
Gotta fix the details ont eh drawing I mentioned before now.
Dream. Live. Breathe. Write. All for fiction.
| drats chapter 28 . 1/15/2011
i found a small mistake: Only when the shoes were safely secured to my feet did I resume pacing, much to her dismay.
-you write this forgetting that she can only put on one shoe. So its only a small mistake but i thought you should know.
| Ivymax1234 chapter 33 . 8/15/2010
Okay, so... who in the world is Phoenix?
| Ivymax1234 chapter 32 . 8/15/2010
OMG I'm almost done with the... second... book. I hope you update soon. Even though I haven't caught up...