Reviews for Kiss of Twilight: In the Absence of Light
debs chapter 28 . 8/24/2009
i've been reading ur stories for a month(in fact u were my introduction to this site after and am i glad i started with u)your stories are one of the most original and interesting ones that i've found on this site and i've read princes are evil and ostg and i absolutely,completely adore this this series u get the chemistry really right...its just crackling n ofcourse as always a damn good plot with its twists and turns...(this time i just had to review especially when i remebered that i don't need to sign in if d author doesn't mind) n so here i am to beg,plead n blackmail u into atleast writin more of the Lycan,bliss story...ah! i know i know...i shouldn't be greedy but i'm feeling so damn impatient that i'm dyin for either some more helena-vinny action or lycan-bliss!plz pretty please!don't get mad at me...i just love ur stories too damn much!
miss-life chapter 28 . 8/21/2009

First I would like to apologize for not reviewing the last 2 chapters. I was away on myvacation for the past 40 days :D

Now on the review:

chapter 25: Cindy is gloriously evil :D I just love her, but I do hope there's something else to her (like you said in this chapters A/N)

chapter 26: I can't actually remember right now, I need to start preparing lunch before my parents come, so I'm under some pressue :P

chapter 27: Lycan and Bliss are very entertaining! I didn't even miss Vincent because of them!

I wish you all the luck with the publishing!

See you next time ;)

MuseofMagic chapter 28 . 8/20/2009
Gah! It's been FOREVER! I kept seeing the emails telling me you updated and I was like 'arghh must go.. read...' but then when I'd actually go to do it either something would come up or I would decide I wasn't really in the mood to read no matter how much I love your stories.

So then today I was like 'I want to read and write!' and it's the first time in... umm... hmm.. -counts on her fingers... and toes... and firefox tabs... and desktop icons... and anything she can use to count and then huffs and throws her hands up- a long time... since I've been inspired to write or wanted to read.

So the first thing I did was bring up KoT and I read all the updates and my previously angsty mood was violently tossed back and forth and toyed with by your chapters, but I generally ended on an almost satisfied emotion; however, I am deeply upset that we're not to book three yet. As much as I love your story I need the resolution! I need to know the ending. I'm terribly impatient, and yet, I won't ask. -grumblesandcoughs- asmuchasiwantto.

On a brighter and less... me complaining... note... My inspiration for writing has only been nurtured by reading these chapters and by seeing how many you've turned out! I feel ready to tackle all three of the new stories I want to start and even continue some others. Well, two others. I had to put several on hold because my writer's block has been so bad. I don't want to take on too much and burn myself out. In fact, I might limit myself to one story, but... the choice would be too difficult to bear! ;-;

But yeah, you really made me want to write and even though the stories I want to do are so massively different from yours I've gotten so many ideas while I was reading. I guess reading your story just opened my mind to creativity and reactivated my imagination. So you should really update again soon so I continue to feed my brain and maybe get some progress done.

Anyway, oh my goodness, look at the length of this review! And it's all rather pointless isn't it, since all I needed to say was that your updates were FANTASTIC as always! Here I am rambling on about me and crap. Sorry, hun XD So if you didn't understand anything above don't worry it's not important, but I feel like it would suck if I just deleted it all now so just know the only thing you need to get from this is that I love your work and it was amazing and you need to keep going with it!

Much love,

SpotWillRuleTheWorld chapter 28 . 8/20/2009
Why must you make a third book! I had been really hoping it would end here! But it is idiotic of me to be complaining., I get more to read right? Hurry and update and tell Vinny to stop being such a #$%! for me.
eaststar chapter 28 . 8/19/2009
I had a great time in reading your sequel but there is a small detail I think is slightly off. About the "horrible" red dress... Cindy has good taste in clothes, doesn't she? Didn't she make Drusilla look pretty in OSTSG? Over than that, there isn't much I victimize in your work-except for the titles... You can work on making them a bit more catchy.
Krissy chapter 28 . 8/13/2009
Okay, I feel like I might know how the story is going to happen. So this is my theory:

Somehow, don't know how, but Vincent and Helena are going to have sex in the far out future. Therefore, Helena gets pregnant and that's why the princess is needed to stay alive because that baby will have to be given up to the witch. Since it'll be Vincent's first child, and he promised that baby to the witch.

It's a far out theory that probably isn't going to happen but who knows. Do you mind giving me a shoutout if you do happen to read this and I'm on the right line?

Liliy chapter 28 . 8/9/2009
I read both of the Kiss of Twilight stories in one day, thats how great they are.

Update sonn(:
Red Warden chapter 28 . 8/6/2009
I just want to say I love the tension between Helena and Vincent. It cracks me up because she has no ideal what she puts him through and it drives him crazy. Also can I ask, is the next book in the series through Vincent’s pov? Please say yes, because I would love to know what is going through that boy’s head.
vesta-star chapter 28 . 8/1/2009
hi!this story is fantastic!i luv this twist to sleeping beauty and cinderella!the characters are wonderful:) my favourite is definitely vinny (eventhough he was a jerk the last time)

anyway,looking forward to the next chapter!:)
Si-Sidera chapter 28 . 7/31/2009
YAY! yayayayay oh im so happyy! Im in germany right now and have been disconnected from an internet source for days. It was killin me that I haven't seen an update ;P So I really love Bliss right now, she adds something really nice to Lycans character. Just when everything was getting serious with the torture of Helenas fingers BOOM interruption by an energetic, intelligent, blissfull Bliss. I like that Lycan is less dark now.

VINNY! You said he's comin back, and I can't WAIT!

Gosh it's hard writing with a german computer o.O I think i pressed a wrong button...

Sorry for the beta troubles. I really hope she starts taking on her responsibilities or you find someone better!

Still Here,

written oops not signed in chapter 28 . 7/30/2009
I'm glad my review made you laugh, but this vinny not fessing up thing is no laughing matter! okay, it is, but I don't think helena would agree.

I just realized that I haven't checked up on "the sparrow and the wolf". have you been updating it? aw crap.

ANYWAY, back to the review. I'm so absent minded! okay, so basically, I love lycan. and bliss sounds... really cool actually! she's sweet, but not annoying. will she be the... "killer" of lycan?

I also liked how you brought up the puppet thing. I think that's sort of been a theme throughout, so it was great really... visualizing it. makes the point hit home.

as always, your writing is fabulous and I can't wait to see VINNY. how did you make me come to love a fictional character?
Helenor chapter 28 . 7/30/2009
Aha, so is Bliss going to be the cause of Lycan's death? He seems to have a bit of a soft spot for her. Bliss is really cuute.

I also really liked the puppet image of Helena. It shows how she sees (or saw maybe) herself.

If Vinny fought a dragon, he'd probably make it cry with mean words or something, yeah.
cookycook chapter 28 . 7/30/2009
Oh boy things are getting interesting now :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
xXReader.Desu.YoXx chapter 28 . 7/30/2009
Beta busy with Gaia? Give her a few days, that site can be addicting D: I managed to quit!

after a year long addiction, i'm gaia-clean.

anywho- loved the story. I joined your forums! I just wanted to know if you wil be updating Eve's story any time soon D:

Oh, you prob. remember my comment there- i said that she sounds sexy~


anywho, i keep imagining ycan from the new underworld movie. simply because they share the same name and i thought he looked deliciously gorgeous in that one.

oh, and happy birthday! or, happy late birthday. or, belated happy- ugh, just happy birthday!

can't wait for your story to be published, i woud def. buy it. so let me know when it's out in the book shelves! yaya~


What a perfect name, Bliss for such character. it was cue. Melia is in love? I BET IT'S LYCAN.

hum, i'm jsst typing randomly and i know it's not a very uh, er- professional review but I CAN'T HEP IT. i'm just so thriled that you updated.



A Tentative Possibility chapter 28 . 7/30/2009
Is the next chapter the one containing 'the slap'? Ah, can't wait for it.

On another note, very interesting chapter. I'm starting to believe I can't bear to wait for each chapter... maybe I'll just wait till you finish book 2 to read the remaining ones in a go!

On second thoughts, nah.
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