|Reviews for Kiss of Twilight: In the Absence of Light|
| Ivymax1234 chapter 20 . 7/28/2010
So... if Dominic gets "connected" to Eve, and then she dies... won't that make him an even more twisted person? Because if he thinks that everyone he loves dies or leaves him... and if she dies... ugh, so confusing. I'm asuming that Eve sacrifices herself for Dominic? No, don't answer that.
So I guess you don't need a beta... oh well...
| Ivymax1234 chapter 18 . 7/28/2010
"I will never believe that, not matter what happens," I replied, "but you need to talk to him."
I think you meant "no matter".
If you ever get KoT published, would it be in one book with 3 parts? Or just one big book? Just curious...
Good luck finding a second beta (if you haven't already found one, that is).
I'd volunteer, but I still have to finish reading all this...
| PurpleReader29 chapter 33 . 6/6/2010
That dream chapter was beyond amazing! I think I forgot to breathe during my fits of laughter. The fairy duds, the dragon (wow, her stupidity was halarious), Vinny. Awsome!
| PurpleReader29 chapter 29 . 6/6/2010
Yeah! Stacy has the courage to face Cinderella! And Hellena's prediction came true!
| PurpleReader29 chapter 12 . 5/30/2010
Eve is the best! Love her!
| PurpleReader29 chapter 9 . 5/29/2010
Yeah! Vinny has finally shown he loves her! (Now stop acting like a jerk)
| PurpleReader29 chapter 5 . 5/29/2010
If he loves her so much why is he such a jerk? I mean, come on Vinny. (I had a longer, much stronger rant planned, but I kept forgetting to review and I forgot it.) Darn you Vinny!
| Kani Dectsani chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
This prologue confused me completely. There was no *remembering from before* or *Years ago*. It just started into it, not taking into account where the first story left off. I like it, as it does show a lot into Vinny, but there needs to be a definite "This isn't the present" this going on.
| PurpleReader29 chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
I love the ending! Go surprises!
| chrissy.qld chapter 34 . 3/23/2010
KEEP GOING! THIS BOOK IS AMAZING! YOU HAVE ME HOOKED! AHAHAHA :D
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
| RoseLife chapter 34 . 2/7/2010
OMG i really love this story
and i say this in all seriousness... i WILL die if you do not continue.
I NEED TO READ MORE, i need closure! LOL
this is so captivating, its like i can't stop reading, i must know how it ends, i really hope you keep writting the 3rd installment
i'll do anything :P
| angelrobbins chapter 34 . 1/6/2010
| Nyasia A. Maire chapter 18 . 11/17/2009
Well, as much as I like Vinnie, I just had to make a negative comment about him in regards to this chapter. Hi, BTW...I just found your stories and I've been reading them the past couple of days. I like them very much, but...
This is the part of the chapter about which I am commenting:
“But it is amusing,” he added as an afterthought.
“What is?” I asked.
“Without Eve, who will you go crying to when you can’t handle me?”
I do believe that is an all-time low for Vinnie. He's making a joke out of Eve's death. I realize that he makes heartless and cruel remarks all the time, but that borderlines on being a remark that a villian would make. Shame on him.
| kitelina chapter 15 . 11/10/2009
Keep the chemistry! You wrote it so well :)
| hobo90210 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
I love love love your stories. I'm been a silent reader for a while now. I finally get my lazy butt off the couch and write u a review. I love how you spin a original fairy tale like cinderella and the sleeping beauty into something magical. You gave the character depth. You make prince charming realistic Show that he is not alway the knight in shining armor. He have his own flaws. Can't wait for ur next update.