|Reviews for Kiss of Twilight: In the Absence of Light|
| the.writer.hannah chapter 10 . 8/11/2010
ah! i keep on reading those ?s atthe end and going oh crap i shudda just waited for that part of the story to come!
| Ivymax1234 chapter 25 . 8/3/2010
"Mama told me that it was her favorite tale, but I could never see why. She told me that it left her wondering what had happened to Penelope. She fancied that Penelope had become more than a mermaid. She had become the spirit of the ocean, watching over both the mermaids she so dearly loved at the humans she couldn't help but care for—the bloodline that was hers as much as it was Caspian's."
"...both the mermaids she so dearly loved at the humans she couldn't but care for..." I think you meant "and the humans".
"Caspian"? Isn't that like "Prince Caspian" from Chronicles of Narnia (by C.S. Lewis)?
Another thing that's been bugging me a bit: I was just thinking that you had WAY too many words italicized in the last few chapters... it might even have been for longer... I hope you fix that if you get a chance.
Good chapter, and happy updating!
| Ivymax1234 chapter 22 . 7/28/2010
You know, before you told us how old Eve was, when she was at, like, Magnolia, I got the impression that she was an older woman, like maybe in her thirties or fourties. Just so you know.
| Ivymax1234 chapter 21 . 7/28/2010
No Q&A this chapter? Oh well...
| Ivymax1234 chapter 20 . 7/28/2010
So... if Dominic gets "connected" to Eve, and then she dies... won't that make him an even more twisted person? Because if he thinks that everyone he loves dies or leaves him... and if she dies... ugh, so confusing. I'm asuming that Eve sacrifices herself for Dominic? No, don't answer that.
So I guess you don't need a beta... oh well...
| Ivymax1234 chapter 18 . 7/28/2010
"I will never believe that, not matter what happens," I replied, "but you need to talk to him."
I think you meant "no matter".
If you ever get KoT published, would it be in one book with 3 parts? Or just one big book? Just curious...
Good luck finding a second beta (if you haven't already found one, that is).
I'd volunteer, but I still have to finish reading all this...
| PurpleReader29 chapter 33 . 6/6/2010
That dream chapter was beyond amazing! I think I forgot to breathe during my fits of laughter. The fairy duds, the dragon (wow, her stupidity was halarious), Vinny. Awsome!
| PurpleReader29 chapter 29 . 6/6/2010
Yeah! Stacy has the courage to face Cinderella! And Hellena's prediction came true!
| PurpleReader29 chapter 12 . 5/30/2010
Eve is the best! Love her!
| PurpleReader29 chapter 9 . 5/29/2010
Yeah! Vinny has finally shown he loves her! (Now stop acting like a jerk)
| PurpleReader29 chapter 5 . 5/29/2010
If he loves her so much why is he such a jerk? I mean, come on Vinny. (I had a longer, much stronger rant planned, but I kept forgetting to review and I forgot it.) Darn you Vinny!
| Kani Dectsani chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
This prologue confused me completely. There was no *remembering from before* or *Years ago*. It just started into it, not taking into account where the first story left off. I like it, as it does show a lot into Vinny, but there needs to be a definite "This isn't the present" this going on.
| PurpleReader29 chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
I love the ending! Go surprises!
| chrissy.qld chapter 34 . 3/23/2010
KEEP GOING! THIS BOOK IS AMAZING! YOU HAVE ME HOOKED! AHAHAHA :D
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
| PurpI3.14 chapter 34 . 2/7/2010
OMG i really love this story
and i say this in all seriousness... i WILL die if you do not continue.
I NEED TO READ MORE, i need closure! LOL
this is so captivating, its like i can't stop reading, i must know how it ends, i really hope you keep writting the 3rd installment
i'll do anything :P