|Reviews for Kiss of Twilight: In the Absence of Light|
| angelrobbins chapter 34 . 1/6/2010
| Nyasia A. Maire chapter 18 . 11/17/2009
Well, as much as I like Vinnie, I just had to make a negative comment about him in regards to this chapter. Hi, BTW...I just found your stories and I've been reading them the past couple of days. I like them very much, but...
This is the part of the chapter about which I am commenting:
“But it is amusing,” he added as an afterthought.
“What is?” I asked.
“Without Eve, who will you go crying to when you can’t handle me?”
I do believe that is an all-time low for Vinnie. He's making a joke out of Eve's death. I realize that he makes heartless and cruel remarks all the time, but that borderlines on being a remark that a villian would make. Shame on him.
| kitelina chapter 15 . 11/10/2009
Keep the chemistry! You wrote it so well :)
| hobo90210 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
I love love love your stories. I'm been a silent reader for a while now. I finally get my lazy butt off the couch and write u a review. I love how you spin a original fairy tale like cinderella and the sleeping beauty into something magical. You gave the character depth. You make prince charming realistic Show that he is not alway the knight in shining armor. He have his own flaws. Can't wait for ur next update.
| georgiaaa chapter 27 . 10/25/2009
i've just spend the past day steadily reading (instead of being at school :D)
and i'm quite enjoying myself here.
but GOD! spoilers much?
i have to close my eyes when i finish each chapter to make sure i dont accidently read something down the bottom you've said to someone.
besides that though, i really like this.
just thought i'd mention that...
| Treehugger22 chapter 33 . 10/25/2009
So I know I already reviewed the last chapter, but what can I say. I'm HOOKED! And you haven't posted the new story yet. And I check every night for it (I need my bedtime story). So this is me yet again reviewing to say Please please please update!
I figure if I pester you a lot about updating one of three things will happen:
1) You'll be so annoyed that you'll post a chapter just to make me stop.
2) You'll be so annoyed you'll withhold the new story just to spite me.
3) You'll just automatically delete every review you see is from me without reading it.
Question: Is the next story still going to be in Helena's POV? Or is it going to switch around? I'm just wondering how that's going to work during the whole pricked her finger and is asleep thing. I mean I can totally think of ways you may do it there, but yeah. It's just a question.
| Treehugger22 chapter 34 . 10/22/2009
AHH! Loved it. I'm glad you're going to move Eve's death I agree that it was too rushed. It was like...doobee doobee WABAM! dead. Just like that. Like you had set your mind to do it and had to get it over with...like tearing off a band-aid. Oh well I'm glad it's going to be changed.
I gotta admit I am SO frustrated that I have to wait for a whole nother book. Don't get me wrong, I love your writing, but dangit I'm ready for the end! So...maybe have mercy on me and my fellow readers and get that third book up soon? I mean...you said you'd have it up...and it's not...and well...yeah. Please?
| Written chapter 34 . 10/21/2009
OH MY GOD, HEY!
Guess what I spent all day doing today? catching up on all the stories I stopped reading a few weeks ago. Pleasure reading, you could call it. I'm done with midterms, so this is my reward to myself. although i have another round of exams coming up in a couple weeks... sigh. "midterms" is a misnomer.
Okay, first of all, Eve's death was... strange. sad... and horrifying. Especially since I had recently re-read the early chapters where eve was first introduced :( I can't believe it went down like that!
though judging by your author note in this chapter, you're going to rewrite it... which should be interesting. I'm not sure how many times I can stand to watch eve die, though I guess I'm glad she's... sort of still alive.
also, "wife #1" made me laugh.
MOVING ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER:
robert and francis WOULD be fairies, wouldn't they? I agree. this made me laugh!
(“Well, technically, there were supposed to be three of us, but nobody wanted to be the third fairy; Dominic threatened to kill us, Christopher said he was busy, Eric laughed at us, and Bianca chased us away from George.”)
HAHA. but who WOULDN'T want to be merriweather?
okay, not going to lie, the dragon scene in sleeping beauty was one of my FAVORITE movie moments growing up. i mean, the whole movie was meh right up until that moment, and then it was like BEAUTY ON THE SCREEN. no idea what was wrong with me as a child. haha. I guess I just love a scary villain.
melina as the dragon and the weight thing made me laugh. And vinny is such a doofus! hahaha. loved it... glad I finally got around to reading this. cheers on finishing!
| MellyMeliza chapter 34 . 10/6/2009
I Can NOT wait for the next book!
You said next wendsday (which is tomorrow) so hopefully you update. (Wow, that sounded totally psycotic. Hahaha)
I just finished catching up, and Im totally in love with this story! Definitely one of my favorites. :)
| reachforit chapter 34 . 9/29/2009
OMGE! Vincent was like... SO CUTE! Anyway, why is Phoenix so obsessed with Melina? Okay, not really "obsessed", but why wife #1?
| SpotWillRuleTheWorld chapter 34 . 9/29/2009
Ahh, Vinny... )
| SourTofu chapter 34 . 9/29/2009
lmao! that was absolutely hilarious! you have to keep that as like an epilogue or something for the story, don't let anyone talk you into otherwise!
| miss-life chapter 34 . 9/29/2009
I am actually very happy that chapter 31 will be the final chapter of this book. I can't remember if I told you, but I too, found Eve's death a bit rushed.
This chapter was quite entertaining and I loved everything about the fairies! Those two guys would make excelent fairies! :D
| Red Warden chapter 34 . 9/29/2009
Stuff from Vinny’s Pov is so much fun. I just love how he won’t even admit to himself that he is in love with Helena, but at the same time he refers to her as HIS Helena. And I love how he tells her what he’s thinking but he says it so sarcastically that she thinks he is making fun of her. I can’t wait till she calls him by his first name, just to see what he does.
| SourTofu chapter 24 . 9/28/2009
Okay, so I'm still loving the story very much (even though Vinny is making me hate him cause he's such a jerk!) Anyway, I just wanted to say that i think that you should defiantly try to get these stories published! but i have some advice on that . . . have you ever heard of the writer's market? it's a book with a list of publishers and requirements that they have for sending in stories-great investment if you're serious about sending you fic in. also, i would only send to one publisher at a time. read the one's in your genera and make a list with your favorites at the top and then cross them off as they get sent back. and don't take it too personally if they get sent back (because most likely you will get rejected, and not always because there is anything wrong with the fic either. point and case-harry potter got rejected TONS of times and look how successful that book turned out!), just look at any recommendation that they might have and go on to the next on your list. Good luck!
p.s. i know that you probably posted this a while ago but i thought I'd reply to it anyway. I absolutely love this fic and i think it would be a shame to NOT try to get it published!