lol, so that's why you named him Vinny! it's such a cute name, so it works! and I've read original world and mad world and both were great (In fact those two stories are the reason why i switched into fantasy writing!), so if you ever get the chance you should definitely look them up.

Lol! she just left them all arguing! oh! and the scene a few chapters back with vinny and helena and teh sleeping arrangements was beyond funny! i had to read it twice cause i couldn't stop laughing!

Ah, I love the Robert and Francis fairies. I especially enjoyed Robert's outburst on sword care. Hah, of course he would say something like that! Vinny's insults to Melina Dragon was funny as well.

I hope you do well on your evolution homework. I need to read 3 more chapters on fish biology and evolution. Agh!

I can't wait till Book I!

I think I'm starting to like Robert again-not for Helena though! I'm still on team Vinny! as for favorite characters . . . let's see Vinny (he's just too cute!) Melina (She reminds me of one of the MC's in one of my own stories, but i could just be biased) and Cordie (I don't know why! I just love her!lol)

WOW! Book II's over... which only means there's gonna be more action coming up soon. ;D

Keep up the AWESOME writing! (I love the parody, it's so cute.)

[“Somehow, that makes sense.” “What does?” “The two of you being fairies,”]

I laughed quite a bit at that! RxF! -coughs-

Good times, good reading. Love it as always!

THIS WAS HILARIOUS! :D I loved it. I really did... It was awesome!

:)) Vinny's dream was hilarious. ))

I'm glad to know that I'll be seeing Eve again in the third book. :D

Hope you update soon! :)

I love how you turned the movie sleeping beauty into a huge satire. It was hilarious! But I was a little confused about Vincent kissing Helena. Was it a dream? She was awake so what was the thing about kissing her in the dream? I'm confused. Maybe you should just clear it up a bit. But I enjoyed the rest of the chapter.

I'm glad your rewriting Eve's death. And this chapter was HILARIOUS! Vinny was 100% in character...smug...arrogant and a fool! I can't wait till the next book comes out! ]

(this is .xx btw)

Hehe. I liked it. :) I think it was funny enough, but Vinny could have been more sarcastic. I liked how he made her run off with his words, but Melina doesn't strike me as a person who would run off like that. It'd make more sense if she summoned someone else, disappeared, and let Vinny run him/her off. In which chapter did this happen? Because I feel like Eve should have been in this.

Is Phoenix like the other immortals? As in, would he actually die if his loved one killed him?

omg theres a third book -_- dam! i hate reading stuff incomplete!

One thing I dont get its lik evryone seems to be the same age.. as in there no age barriers like evn lIly speaks too adult like nd vinny i can understand cuz hes knd aold nd gona be king but lik there seems to be no spearation of parents nd adults to teens.. its odd sumtymes.

Sorry i havent reviewed in the last couple of chapters! But your chapters are as great as always! But i do have one question, Back in the first book when Helena was in School and wrote Vincent while she was away, Just How bad did he want her to write him, and why?

will the next book be the last book?

also how did eve's mother know about the phoenix?

since all the people that find out have to stay at the mountain.

“Well done, Helena. Did you think of all that by yourself, or did you have help?” lOL! i cldnt help but crack up. ndd aawerz Eve is leaving .. i def. enjoyed her charcater so much hidden depth.