So THAT'S why he's like that towards her...

Wow.

Not Vinny makes a whole lot more sense. I didn't want him to be sarcastic and mean just because.

The prologue is promising but how could it not be when it has such a great story behind it.

:D

Can't wait for chapter 1!

_Tina_

WE! THE BEGINING OF THE END! :D I wanna know so badly what's going to happen _ Okay! Question: when you get ideas for the story, how do you retain them? Do you carry around a notebook or something? Thank you for the update!

This is pretty interesting. Now we know why Helena stopped calling Vinny by his name and the origin of his sarcastic nature...well, sort of. I like this as a first chapter to the second book. I can't wait for more of this book. I'm so excited!

skiphop! first off, /congratulations/ on finishing book one. i /have/ read it, it's just been so long since i last reviewed that i need to collect my thoughts before i leave a proper review. or else i think i'll say absolutely nothing worth hearing. i'm so excited for you, haha. this is so thrilling. i don't think i've ever followed an author through a multi-part story. aanyways. this chapter - it's great. just great. i really like how you found that perfect length - it's short enough to draw you in & then spit you back out again. it gives enough detail that it's not boring, & yet it won't leave someone completely lost. because you know how people are with reading prequels. sometimes they just - don't. lol. you wouldn't believe how excited i got reaading your a/n. because vinny is one of the characters in this story that leaps off the page. er, screen. anything about him is good. i mean, we always knew there was a reason he's the way he is but now that it's actually being explained ... god, it makes so much sense. the scene, that is. it's just very realistic & natural. i adore vinny anyways. haha. okay, i've prattled on. lovely work. can't wait for the next chapter :) & you will be hearing from me on prelude eventually. promise you that.

-kait

Aww... So that's why Vinny is that way. He's so sweet (if not now, when he was younger). I feel sad for him...

Oh yeah, I want to see the picture that made you update earlier and twice :D Where can I see it?

an odd way to begin, but this was a great prologue. I'm so glad you started this so soon after finishing the first book. Keep it up and update soon!

Faith

ARGH!

I've been waiting for like EVER for this!

I loved the first book and i just couldn't wait till this was posted!

Are Vinny and Helena going to ever get together?

Will Vinny man up and just tell her how he feels? Or Kiss her?

-Erika

P.S As you can tell I'm excited lol Sorry for the interrogation...

:]

oh, poor vincent! that was a sad, but good beginning to the story. it seems a bit odd that you chose to start here, but I'm sure you have your reasons :)

Wait, I thought the visit was when she was really tiny, and then they didn't tell Helena the whole story until she was older? Maybe mention that she completely blocked it out, if you want this to be the story we all read.

Looks good so far. A different feel than the last one, and deeper.

aww, poor vinny ( so helena is actually the reason for all of his cynicism! well, I don't know, I can't completely blame her for that... if he had forgiven her or tried to talk to her again, everything would have been fine. He is in control over himself and he could have become a different person if he tried. Anyway, he's far more interesting with his attitude ) can't wait for more!