|Reviews for My Sweet Addiction|
| Kristina Suko chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I just have to say, I love the word aphrodisiac for some odd reason. And visceral.
I adore the way you describe, and the rhythm of your poetry. It's delightful.
| Ironic Eraser chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
well, i personally don't really get poems, so this might take a while...anyway, this is a pretty good descriptive poem (i wish i could write like that)...
| 123454321 chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
This may be metaphorical, but I now crave chocolate...
Your use of elipses (...) begins to become boring in the third stanza and lose some of their emphasis by the end of the second.
The metaphor between a woman and chocolate is cute and in this case very apropos.
Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).