Reviews for broken
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Whoa. This really just hit me. I love the way it's written. I love the last two stanzas. Thanks for posting this (even though it was forever ago and I'm just discovering it now).

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Tytherpol chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
it really is great to be able to be pretty much anonymous with things like fictionpress or whatever

so you can share the things inside of you and just let them out without fear of being judged by real people you care about or anything

this is wonderfully written.

the imagery and emotions are startling honest

by far my favorite part:

"We’re going somewhere.

We get there."
Emma the Paradox chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
"I’m still shivering, but her arms are tight around me and she’s warm."

Beautiful! I love this kind of writing. Simple, sharp, and powerful. You paint a wonderfully heartbreaking picture. And just so you know, I believe you can be "fixed."