|Reviews for being lonely|
| Enigmatic Paramedic chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Oh, sweetie. :[
This is beautiful, though.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
sad but pretty. women should be woman. nice job.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
but an ordinary women...woman
I like how the beginning and the end connect... it's really nice.. and all the imagery in the piece is absolutely beautiful... the curtains swimming is her eyes is wonderful and the part about the spot where someone drew out her insignificance was really wonderful
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| Written chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I like the way you mention drawing and ink and paper. it holds the poem together, even if you didn't do it with any intention.
I really liked it!