Reviews for Impulse
Princess Wanderer chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
way too fast but cute
ChaCha chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Aphrodite is totes the Greek goddess of sex. And fertility. Oho.
exogenesissymph chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Okay, this was hilarious. You had me laughing so hard during the tree part. And the bike part.
One thing I think you can work on is the ending. I've seen a lot of great fics that have an interesting beginning, wonderful middle, ( Tree. Tree? Tree. ) but kinda just becomes giddier and giddier and ends in adrenaline.
I think might be because I don't really like reading fics with a lot of fluff, but your ending is one of those that is happily ever after, we're kissing now and I'm so happy I Beverly knew he liked me too...
Y'know?
I think this has great potential to become something deeper, but if you want to keep it like this, that's fine, I still like it :D
color outside the lines chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Uh..stalker much? I have to say I was a little surprised at Rhys. I mean, who would of guessed! The hot jock secretly liked the girl. Dawn is such a light hearted innocent character! I love her. :) Then Rhys has that soft cliche side to him. It was so cute! I truthfully don't know anything about Greek Gods, maybe I'll learn! And one thing. how do you pernounce Rhy? Rie? Ree?...
ant0006 chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
This was great, and I loved it, but... I'm sure Aphrodite actually is the goddess of sex, as well.

Not that it matters that much to the storyline anyway, so, thank you for posting this story - its awesome :)
Sparklingjewel12 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I don't think there's anything you need to fix because this story is amazing!
chibi-Clar chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
super cute!
love it!
Resurgem chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
That was perfection :) x
Edna-Mode413 chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
adored it
Be-U-tiful chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
This was so cute! I love these cliche one shots (:
HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Awesome! Love it!
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
That was cute and sweet :)
heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
dis is AWESUM :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
you love greek gods? Me too! I love them! I actually read a series called: "Percy Jackson and the olympians" and "Percy Jackson and the heroes of olympus" and they are basically about Greek gods in the modern world, I LOVE them (I know... I'm such a nerd) but they have only one problem, for helpless romantic (like me) there isn't much romance in the first books, the relationship of the character grows VERY gradually, it's kind of annoying but worth it (in my opinion).
On the other side, I really liked this one-shot is very cute! I'm reading your other fics too know.
Bye! and keep writing you have talent
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
very good. i loved rhys' confession. thanks for sharing!
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