very good. i loved rhys' confession. thanks for sharing!

This is a truly sweet, simple, and lovely story. It's definitely worth the time reading :)

This is adorable!

this was sooooo soooo cutee! loved it great job!

"The sun was shining, the birds were singing, the flowers were blooming, the temperature was just about perfect, and all I wanted to do was spin around in circles with my eyes closed until I collapsed." i LOVE those days, just pure happiness -

i loved how they kept crashing into things, really cute ) and dawn just seems so free, just being herself and saying all those potentionally embarassing things.

thanks for a sweet story!

ahah so cute!

Made me go 'aw'. :)

Aww... It's cuuuute! :)

I really enjoyed this oneshot immensely. Ha ha . . . it so cute how he let her bumped into him. It seems that the two are kind of clumsy and are perfect for each other. I love how she asked if Apollo and Aphrodite were related to one another. I really do admit that I do not the greek gods that well and this story kind of makes me want to go back and brush up on it. Good job. I appreciate this very cute story. XD

Loved the whole walking parts... lol!

Love it!

This story is amazing! It has a very good subject and it was a good laugh. :D

Now I'm curious... how did you spell Aphrodie before? XD

To cute! Loved it so much!

SO CUTE I love it such a cliche but cliches are always the best Love it