Reviews for taiwan
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Aww, that's so sad. I liked the bit about her spine being straight. That just seemed like an interesting thing to notice about someone. The descriptions are a bit much at times, but overall, it's a very nice little poem. Keep writing! :)
simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 3/9/2008
hello kitty reference! awesome.. lol

I love the whole 14 flight thing.. and how the tray of authentic sushi was getting you trough... I liked that... the first line was my favorite though... and I can totally relate to the ending.. I flew to the Philippines... two layovers... and over 20 hours.. so yea... lol

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simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
luggage's, duffel bags... luggages

I like the commentary on security.. it's o true.. I also love how snow makes you happy... most ppl hate it (not me though!) and the last line was a beautiful description
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I like the format a lot...especially how you spaced out disappeared... and I really love the ending "translucent tears" and "alabaster cheeks" was beautiful as were all the other descriptions of her

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123454321 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Very accurate portrayal of the feelings you put forth. Your descriptions are nice too.

I think the last line detracts some of the almost otherworldly beauty you built in the rest of the piece, unfortunately; but, I have no suggestions on how to change it.

-J.A.

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