Reviews for Birthday!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
I like the repetition.. and the flow.. the rhyming is nice as well... although in the last part tonight doesn't rhyme with anything.. also I was a bit confused as to why in the beginning you seemed to be upset about your birthday... that confused me, but other than that I really liked the piece

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