Reviews for The Journey |
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![]() ![]() Loved it, as I already told you. And now I am really curious about the story behind Jen and Jared. Do we get to know more? |
![]() ![]() OH-MY-GOSH, That was he most amazing end ever. This was a truly amazing page turner, and awesome romance. A great end to my long day. Thanks for taking the time to write it. I Loved every minute of your story ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo! This was a really cute story and I enjoyed it immensely. I love your writing style and I can't wait to see what else you have written. Great job! -Alex |
![]() ![]() I just finished reading your story and I think you wrote it very well. It was a really touching and inspiring one. You've got great potential. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your stories. And by the way I really loved the ending! Keep up the good work! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful! I loved the ending! I've been reading it forever, and I really, really loved it! Great work, i dont think i've ever read a better story on fictionpress! |
![]() ![]() Need more end ending. Rushed a bit through the past few chapters, didn't develop enough. BUT PRETTY |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved ur story! :) |
![]() ![]() Awesome gma! loved the chapter so emotional and sweet... more soon please! Poly PS: Mule's can't puke, in fact its why a stomach ache/problem is so dangerous for them, the only way something comes up is if you stick your hand down there ! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AH! Mule puke? This is anything but mule puke. Loved it :) |
![]() ![]() You changed the end... |
![]() ![]() ![]() WRITE MORE PLEASE SOON THIS IS AWESOME I AM SO HAPPY PLEASE WRITE MORE I AM BEGGING YOU I AM PLEADING WITH YOU I AM KISSING YOUR FEET PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE |
![]() ![]() ![]() why didn't she run away from her father? like leave town? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() IT'S PRETTY! I love the way it moves so smoothly, not too fast. I wish I could do that . . . |