great chapter... creepy story on Gerard's part though... Great chapter (again), and please Update SOON!

Passing by you light up my darkest skies

You take only seconds to draw me in

So be mine and your innocence I will consume

-dark shines

Hopelessly I'll love you endlessly

Hopelessly I'll give you everything

But I won't give you up

I won't let you down

And I won't leave you falling

If the moment ever comes

-endlessly

so i'll love whatever you become

and forget the reckless things we've done

i think our lives have just begun

i think our lives have just begun

-Falling Away with You

I've always been partial to Endlessly, personally...Falling Away with You makes me sad...

Loved this chapter. It gave insight to his past and how it has seemed to shape him and his family into what they are presently. Your past is always what you make of it, even though it cannot change. Good chapter...cheers.

Awesome chapter!

The truth of Gerard's past finally comes out (along with Liam's past).

I think "Drowning Lessons" would be a great name. That's my favorite song from MCR's first CD :]

personally, i feel that having 'title pending' as the title fo the story will be nice, wont it?

another great chapter. fantastic. i'll be checking out my mailbox everytime i login to msn for the '[FP New Chapter] Chapter 12 of the story, Title Pending, from S. White' email.

Hey. So I didn't review in this chap. So I'm gonna use that to suggest a title in this story.

Have you heard of the song "Vampires Will Never Hurt You" by MCR? It seems to be coinciding with this.

Anyway, that's just a suggestion. ;)

Best chapter to date. A-MA-ZING. I loved it. Still love it, actually. Brilliant. And it's a cliffhanger! Not cool, amiga. Anyways, update soon!

Oh my God! If I were in her place (which I've thought ALL the time) I would either be super scared or so turned ON that pain might seem paradise to me. Anway...this chapter is SCORCHING HOT. Even though the setting's in a winter. Damn.

there's no word to deascribe this story. it's simply , amazing. upload the next chapter please? (:

i really like this story. keep up the great work, and please update soon!

Wow that was amazing! That was a really good chapter. Probably one of your best! I am waiting for the next chapter! Update SOON!

Hey. :) As usual, you never fail us readers with every chappie. Although I did find some grammar errors:

"We were back in her room, me on my usual spot on the sleeping bag, and her on her bed."

Wherein it should be:

"We were back in her room, I on my usual spot on the sleeping bag, and she on her bed."

I guess it's a mistake commonly occured. But our English teacher just had to drill it in our heads. So now, I'm sharing you that drilled knowledge. :p

Hannah

At last! After a week of knowing him, she finally gave him her number. Even though it's only for emergency reasons. ;)

Okay. Is it just me or is she always ending every chapter with a sigh? You know that it's bad for her health. Rather her aura. It pushes people off. :p

Oh..so his monicker's 'Rard eh? Sorry for calling him Gee. Hehe. :p

And sorry if this review was short. I guess 8 and a half hours of surfing the 'net doesn't do me good. :p

Hannah

I'm a bit confused...why didn't Jill wonder how she hasn't seen another person who she assumed was Gee's brother if she says she's observant? Unless the person's inside the car with the heavily tinted windows covering him. :/