Reviews for Drowning Lessons
heartxheat chapter 5 . 3/17/2008
Bring on chapter six!

It would be so much better than this leprachaun movie thing... I think I spelt that wrong... oh well :D
heartxheat chapter 4 . 3/17/2008
yay! sorry it took so long to get on here and read/review the next few chapters.

ah! wonderful yet again. i must agree that i found a few errors, but they shouldn't be that hard to correct.

one was "Tit probably wasn’t the best way to lessenmy stalker appeal."

i laughed :]
Shadowblade1846 chapter 5 . 3/17/2008
OH MY GOSH! your story is absolutley amazing! i could not stop reading it until i finshed what all you have written! please, please write more. you are incredible. i love how you mix in Jill's personal and home life with her new life with Gerard. you dont focus on just one thing and that is amazing. please continue to write, and soon hopefully. dont leave your fans waiting for too long... :)
jyska chapter 5 . 3/16/2008
Cool story so far. I really like your writing style, its easy and enjoyable to read. Im excited to find out more about Gerard's past. That should be fun. Also, a scathing verbal put down from Jill to Savannah would be the highlight of my day (even though I know that's not really in Jill's character). Im excited for girls night, and you're next update. Keep up the good work!

-Jyska
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 5 . 3/16/2008
Great chapter(s). I wonder what factor the sister's fiance will be like. And for the record, fiance is the guy and fiancee is the girl. I'm pretty sure. Anyways, I hope you update soon!
CarlyJo chapter 3 . 3/12/2008
Loved it! I'm getting a creepy feeling from Andrew, don't know why just am. UPDATE SOON!

:3 )

~Carly
heartxheat chapter 3 . 3/11/2008
Gah... that Andrew guy is still there, heh. He sort of reminds me of the ACTUAL Andrew G. at our school in a way... it's sort of weird :]

But the ending was amazing. Gerard's brother is really cute ;]
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 3 . 3/11/2008
Oh, a new character? What's up with this Andrew bloke, I wonder. Sweet dealio. Gerard is going to be in the next chapter, right? I hope so. Update soon!
heartxheat chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
I think I fell in love with Gerard all over again... :D
heartxheat chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I'm back! Great so far; apparently I DID get the time to come on in and read the first to chapters.

Can't wait to see if Craig leaves any reviews, lol.
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
Wow, I'm glad I found this again. Your other one was great, so I'm counting on this one being even better. And I found it funny that both chapters end with them saying goodbye. Well, I love this, so update soon!
CarlyJo chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
Interesting. UPDATE SOON!
autumsphoenix chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
I like it...reminds me of Twilight...but with your own touch. Can't wait to read more.
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