Reviews for Drowning Lessons |
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xiia0moonlight chapter 24 . 8/15/2008 hey , you know , dont get too depress over those ppl that nagged you to hurry in posting the chapters. okay, i migth haven been guilty of that in the past . / and well, it's not really that long till ppl need to complain right ? it's not like you have written 100 chapters or what . i've read a story which had 5x chapters and i'm still continuing . hahaa. hmm , and the fallign in love process is rather impt , and the way you wrote it is great . and twiglight series, i think i only read the first book and now, i already forgetten the plot . i think i can remember yours clearer than twiglight. i can only remember there's someone called bella or smth liddat in the twiglight. and well, post when you feel like it . there's not a need to follow the schedule everytime. it's fun to throw the schedule aside and type your story . in that way , i bet your story will be betta compared to then time when you're rushing to finish it . two weeks or two months, i'll wait . i have time for your story , definitely . and i really enjoyed this combined chapter . [: |
boredbottom chapter 24 . 8/14/2008 Its okay, Ill wait forever if I have to for the next update. Good luck with school:) - I didnt not expect her hurting all of a sudden woah! - magaly |
righthere431 chapter 24 . 8/14/2008 well im sad that you wont be putting up chapters especially this one but its your choice. i love this story from the beginning and i can wait for you to continue writing this until the end |
Jessica chapter 24 . 8/14/2008 Great story, I can't wait for the next chapters. I usually read this at my summer job, but since my work is ending, I probably won't be able to check on your stories till later (since I am starting school too), but hopefully when I come back to check , all the chapters are there. Well done! |
InkyHeart chapter 24 . 8/14/2008 Ok, so you tell me you're leaving for a while and leave me there. Your mean... '[ |
Kahxoxo chapter 24 . 8/13/2008 oh my goodness this was amazing! i really hope you decied to upload soon. just know that i love your story and these chapters were great. the ending is very strong and i am excited to see where your going to go with it...i have a few ideas so hopefully you will decide to update. great job and i cant wait to read the rest so please don't take to long! |
Nodiey chapter 24 . 8/13/2008 Absolutely awesome, that was great, shame that im going to have to wait to see what happens, but ill be waiting for it when it does! |
The bunny always dies first chapter 24 . 8/13/2008 What? And you're not going to update for a long long time? Noo! Why! WHY! |
emilybh chapter 24 . 8/13/2008 "hi-fives" i totally agree! my story keeps being compared to twilight- and, yes, wonderful thanks for comparing it to something maturely written, but you do want your own story, the characters deserve their own story! I agree! :D Just thought I'd vehmenently state my opinion :D I was also inspired by Twilight- and it is kinda obvious, but i'm working on that-, and do we turn away books also inspired by? Sorry- that was more me complaining than about your story. I like it! :D |
balloonatic chapter 24 . 8/13/2008 That was harsh...far too harsh. And I know harsh. A cliffhanger? Really? I mean. I already went through all of my schooling, at a boarding school, so I get that. Believe me. Ms. Heathfar? Gr! Hated her! We didn't even get that much time do complete homework, and yet she thought it fair to give us heaps. So just update when you can. Really. By the way, I'm on my friends account...I have actually been leaving reviews before...anyway...Good luck with school! Hopefully you don't have the short skirts we had... |
Let's Not and Say We Did chapter 24 . 8/13/2008 okay, i understand the whole not being able to update thing, but did you seriously have to end on a cliffy? thats just wrong. i will patiently wait for next update i suppose. man, do cliffhangers suck. |
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 24 . 8/13/2008 That was just plain mean. Here you are, giving us three amazing chapters, and you leave it off on a cliffhanger. Ugh. Now I have to wait FOREVER for the next update. I mean, being a high schooler, I don't know how grueling college is, so I can't really say I know what it's like, but I can imagine, and so I've come to the conclusion that you won't be updating anytime soon. Ugh. Oh well. Just letting you know that I'll be waiting and I thought this was amazing! Have fun at college and write soon! |
just a reader chapter 23 . 8/13/2008 if you meant to say thank you in german, it's danke schoen :) oh, and i absolutely love your story. can't wait for the next update _ |
reader chapter 23 . 8/13/2008 It's Wednesday, where's the update? ;) Despite it's inescapable similarity to the twilight series, I'd say the story is pretty good. Watch out for the drama though, you're making things a little to angsty, especially with Nory. It's beginning to get seriously unrealistic, which is saying something considering that your story is about mythical creatures. Don't break your own rules by pushing things too far. For example, instead of putting Nory's family in the hospital again, just send them out of town if you have some reason to want her at Jill's house. You're asking the reader to suspend their disbelief to read your story, and you don't want to break them out of that state with bad plot development. |
scenerocker chapter 23 . 8/13/2008 I love your story..I cant wait for the next chapter..PLEASE PLEASE update soon..Like really soon... |