Reviews for Approval
Julius Gillian chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
You still have that linkin park edge to the style of your writing like I the time I last read your work a few months ago.

Isn't it frustrating how the word sorry is the only word avaliable we can use to apologize? Even when we sincerely mean it, it gets worn out and more than not sounds artificial.

It's a good piece.

Hey man by the way I added you to msn, I'm interested to meet you.

Take care,

- Julian
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
he’s afraid to go without out?... Im not sure if the without out is a typo or not, but just in case I'd thought Id mention it

I like this last two lines.. i wont say I can relate to them because I think you might come through the computer and murder me, but I have thought something very similar to those two lines before...

the repetition is nice and the line length was really great

PS If your bored check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (links in my profile)
sweets555 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Whoa. What happened? Do I need to come up there and kick ass? I'm in the mood too, and whatever idiot thinks he can make it better just by apologizing...