|Reviews for a night of miracles|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
seemed to not end well although the imagery in this was wonderful yet again. i'd think of a better way to end it cause it just seems like pretty words without a meaning or plot.
| creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
I like the play on the word "reigning", and if none was intended, it's good nonetheless.
Nice imagery dearest.
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
great word choices, but the parentases were unessiscary.
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| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
prophecies painted the floor beneath/them in golden dust with pictures of... putting beneath on the next line messed up the flow in my opinion
I love the lines about the stained glass windows... that was really unique and beautiful... the first line is nice too... especially how it goes with your penname... great job
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| Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Wonderful imagery and rhythm.
The first stanza is breath-taking; peaceful and inspiring. 'Feathers fell from the ceiling' is just as lovely. )
I adore the magic.
| 123454321 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
The last paragraph sounds repetitive because you use the verb 'paint' twice. Maybe you could use something like 'dyeing' to describe the stained glass windows?
I like the time progression shown by your phrases in parentheses.
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