Reviews for Thank you God
d666lisa chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
Heartbreaking, but very well written.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
ohh this is so sad, but insanely well written YEAH!for you. i loved the unexpectedness of it.

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Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
This is sad and touching, especially considering the subject matter.

It's a little disturbing for a child to narrate something like this, but that makes the poem even stronger. The ending lines are very poignant.
123454321 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Though the subject matter is tricky, you pulled it off. Your descriptions are stark enough to envoke a measure of rage, but bland enough for all to read.

The ending made me smile, though it was a bit cliche. (After all, it is a child' prayer.)


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