Reviews for Writing about what you know about
123454321 chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
This sounds like the beginning of an inspirational speakers speach; it doesn't really flow like a poem.

I do like your listing of 'Now all you need now is a pencil, pen, and paper.' Except the second 'now' doesn't really need to be there.

-J.A.

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