Reviews for SOS |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It so sad reading the ending, so bittersweet. But all in all I loved it! xoxo Monique |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fantastic read! Thanks so much for posting! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, i absolutely loved reading this! i think the laser tag chapter was one of my favourites (love that game). you made me laugh quite often too. alphonso was awesome, dude needs his own sequel. anyway, great job. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() EXTREMELY great :) I just finished it, and I absolutely loved it! Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Isaac is such a cutie :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read chapter one. Very interesting, I like it a lot! :) I'll be honest, I didn't really know if I'd like it, but chapter one already has me hooked! I'll review every few chapters, because I'm an obsessive reviewer, haha :) So then, adios for now! PS. Is that guy's real name seriously Soup? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great last chapter. I really liked how you conveyed the whole nostalgic feeling, it felt realistic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a light and enjoyable story! Liked how it was NOT set in a typical story setting, like school. It was refreshing to read. Loved the main characters. It was nice how it ended with the closing of the park. Would have liked some sort of climax and story development, but at the same time, I liked how light this story was, as in not too much crazy drama. It's a believable story. I am reading NACHO right now, and I'm loving it so far. The first chapter gets you hooked and funny. GO READ THAT ONE AS WELL GUYS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since I am gracious enough to review (only gracious because your story was so damn good), I will tell you that I love your story, and have 3 thumbs up for it! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us all! Love Sarah xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was surprisingly amazing. I'm actually very bummed that it ended. I was enjoying it. The characters were very dynamic and realistic with the internal struggle and the sibling rivalry. It was all beautifully constructed. Kudos to you :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() congrats on an amazing story hun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() why in the world wld u be unhappy with this chapter ? i just love the way you frame ur chracters! they all seem like real ppl ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh brilliant ! aw my mother thot i was mad cus i smilin and laughin so much :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw u seem to make a lot of mistakes hun ... do u have a beta? |
![]() ![]() ![]() im totally falling in love with the character of Isaac! hes like a perfect brother ! i want him to be my brother ! |