Reviews for SOS |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aww Sophias cute lol...cant wait to read the next chapter, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOl so cute! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this story is amazing. I love your style. Aw, finally they both admit it. Haha. I can't stop reading this, well I mean, I can, since the next chapter isn't up, but you get the point. Hah. Anyway, great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved loved loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wo this chapter was amazing! they finally kissed, yess! now i'm going to think about this story all the time because this chapter was so good. update as soon as you can please! :) i love soup, he's awesome :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay they kissed! lol cant wait to read more, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh I finally get to read and review it! Loved the chapter, ah god that must've been so embarrassing shouting it over the loudspeaker hahah. Brilliant! And yay they kissed :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't review the last chapter... Still...SERENA AND SOUP KISSED! *insert fireworks here* I quite like Soup. He's like the perfect guy, especially with all of this imperfections. To comment on what you asked during the last chapter: I thought the Sarah's were the same. Would you mind changing the name of Soup's sister maybe, to clear it up. It's really complicated to have two characters with the same names, unless it's explained or discussed in the plot. I did see a few typos in this chapter, if you'd like me to poin them out, you can tell me. I really hope you update sooner next time! -Nathpollen |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAH! FINALLY AN UPDATE! I WAS ABOUT TO ASK FOR SOME SOS! AND IT WAS A REALLY, REALLY GOOD UPDATE! AND THE KISS FINALLY! WHOOT! WHOOT! FINALLY! LOVE IT STILL. UPDATE SOON! ~OBSESSION |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY, that was brilliant. I truly adored this chapter, it was amazing, well done. JM |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really enjoy reading this..its quite intriguing! I read your profile thingamajig and i don't think you should rewrite it at all! Soup and the guys make the story all the more interesting and after reading so many chapters with them in it..i probably wouldn't even try reading the rewrite to be completely honest. If anything i think you should finish this version and do a rewrite afterwards like many others do 'cause it'll prob. be dissapointing to your viewers with you starting all over ! that's just my opinion though! anyhow i love the story, hopefully yo don't rewrite and instead you'll just update soon ) -kay gee |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay you updated! i really do love this story so much, i can't wait for the next update! i hope your exam went well and you weren't too tired :) good job on this chapter, the tension between serena and soup is killing me! update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, he is so cute! :P ~Obsession |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww Soups so cute lol...update soon, cant wait to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, that was a sweet chapter, we know their nickname origins now as well, I always wondered about Soup, and they had a moment. JM |