Ahaha they're soo cute :D

And good luck on the exams! I've got my last one on Friday thank god.

YAY! for the fast update and it was cool to see what happened with Brianna, and i thought sending her away was a cool way to cast her out of the story great job :)

Hahaha... I say 'Mofo' all the time! Can't wait for another update.

I really like this story!

You have great grammar, the only continuous error was brake/break which you thankfully corrected in this chapter.

You're characters are relatable, and Soup is adorable, especially his nickname.

I think that we could see Isaac developpe a bit more, but other than that, it's excellent.

Keep up the great work, and update soon!

Oh well, one way to get rid of her I suppose :P

Can't wait to see Soup again!

Happy new year to you too!

Hii!~ I liked this chapter ] I was sorta surprised that you updated quickly but was like: yay! lol

I actually laughed out loud at the mofo part :D

Well, well done Brianna for taking a step into her second chance. A nice bit of reminiscing from Serena too.

JM

So i Just read everything up to where you have stopped with chapter eleven and i really really love your story. it really good and i love the plot line. Please keep updating, because i cant get enough of the story. oh and i loved the part where soup gave serena the flower, so cute. lol. updates. updates. updates. please!

aww no soup and friends? lol i like the laser tag part with the group of guys, update soon...cant wait to read the next chapter!

*YAY!*

That really was a quick update.

I don't know what to think about Briana leaving. It's kind of bittersweet. I like that instead of yelling at Serena about the incident report, she just thanked her and told her about her plan to move on.

There's more drama in that amusement park, than a soap opera. (Just a random thought,but one I found amusing.) I don't know what to think about Issac being a jerk.

It feels like the story is moving kind of slow.

I still enjoy it though!

CHEERS!

~Jeni

thanks for updating so quickly! i really liked the chapter and i'm still loving your story so well done on whatever you're doing right :)

update soon please :D

Ugh...kill me! My back is so sore I can barely move! (Hence, being on the computer all night, reading ur AWESOME story lol)

I really enjoyed your story, even tho it made me go through so much pain in trying to get comfortable to read it lol but hey, what can I say, I like it :D

I hope you update soon, and if not, that's fine...I'm used to waiting forEVER for updates lol...well...bye!

This was GOOD! Infact good doesn't sum it up good enough! Great would be better!

Gawds! Alfonso is soo funny!

Merry Christmas!

WOW! THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY, AT FIRST I WASN'T SO SURE IF IT WAS ACTUALLY GOING TO BE THAT GOOD, BUT I WAS DEFFINATELY PROVEN WRONG THATS FOR SURE. LOVE THE CHARACTERS AND THERE PERSONALITIES, AND THE PLOT AND EVERYTHING, SUPPER GOOD. UPDATE SOON!

~OBSESSION

This is freakin' hilarious that's what this is. Just plain HILARIOUS. Poor Soup, I feel so bad for him. Can't wait for another update.